Cadbury Dairy Milk Advertisement reviews.

Dairy Milk Chocolate
This is a Dairy milk chocolate you can buy at the Dairy, countdown or pak'nSave.
My advertisement writing stands out so that the people that are looking advertisement, they will want to buy it. The background on my advertisement is standing out because I think that the colour in the background will fit with the Cadbury Dairy Milk picture on the other side. I have to spaces in my advertisement and in those two spaces there is, the product that I am selling, the price that is on top of my product next to the sign that says New, then on the second part of my advertisement there is, the places where you can buy them and also some facts about Cadbury Dairy Milk.
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This advertisement is about a nice ice cold drink called Coca cola. Heaps of people drink this drink because it is delicious and has a nice flavour to taste. As you can see the Polabear living in the north pole witch is the 2nd coldest place on the earth he is holing the Coca cola because it is nice fresh and cold to drink. The Polabear is staring into the Coca cola because he is waiting to open it but I think that he does not even know how to open it. When you taste the Coca cola you feel fresh and also new. The product name stands out on the bottle and also the product name is called coca cola.

By:Eli

What I did in the holidays?

In the holidays my cousin came to my house and slept over, we played Minecraft with Jerome on Hunger Games and I killed Jerome and my little cousin. I and Jerome were playing in survival mode and we went mining and found diamonds. Something else I did in the holidays was I watched Minions at the movies. Another thing I did in the holidays was I went to the Zoo and saw the animals, but all the cool and exciting animals were asleep and all the stink animals were awake.

I enjoyed playing with Jerome and my little cousin because Jerome thought that I never had a Ps3 account and a Ps3, and also because my cousin never comes to my house and plays with me. What I also enjoyed was when I went to my cousin’s house and played video games with him and the family. I watched Jurassic world at the movies.

What I didn’t enjoy about my holidays is when I had to get an injection in the arm because my mother said “There is germs going around and I don’t want you to get sick so you MR and your sisters are getting an injection.

The saddest thing that I didn’t enjoy was my Grandpa past away and got buried down in his grave. Everyone was sad but knew he is now in a better place.

Next holidays I would like to go see Ant Man at the Movies with my 3 cousins and my dad and 3 uncles.

 

The Amazing Blacked Out Moonlight.

 

 

Beautiful moonlight across the sky, seeing the feathery birds fly by. Seeing the rainbow as it  lays on the sandy sandy rays. Candy Floss hits grey clouds, hearing the ocean making sounds.  You see the trees growing up behind your back like a beautiful dream.  The glistening water bouncing across the waves.

Puppet Pals - George and Eli

Golden Paradise