Thursday, 28 May 2015

Descriptive writing

 
The sands so flat it has an invisible sheet over it. The rocks all bumpy and unstable creating an air tunnel leading to the calm ocean. The sound of the crashing waves are so loud. Imagine fish passing by. The green leaves all connected to one tree.
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2 comments:

  1. Armaan and Jamie12 June 2015 at 09:14

    That was an amazing description from you we thought that we were truly there. Great work.

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  2. Elysia C322 July 2015 at 11:38

    Great description Mr. Toni Vu! It really makes me dream that I'm right there! u r an author!

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