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Friday, 29 May 2015
The sliver white waterfall
The running water flows down to the dark green pond. The flowing white waterfall splashes down onto the rock. The sun is rising, the native plants are shinning dark green. Gushing water flows down into the freezing pond.
Nice ajrctives C3. I like how you describeed the beautiful waterfall. My best part is where it says Gushing water flows down into the frezing pond.
ReplyDeletevery descriptive
ReplyDeleteWOW! what a amazing descriptive writing.
ReplyDeleteHow deep is the dark green pond.
ReplyDeleteI like how you know about waterfalls C3.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said the running water flows down to the dark green pond.
Cool writing and that is a good decription.
ReplyDeleteits a cool water fall with a great pond and a good view
ReplyDeleteit looks like sonshine ranch
ReplyDeleteVery good description. We liked how it was creative good job C3.
ReplyDeleteI can really make a picture with you description keep it up
ReplyDeletehow do you know its a freezing pond Mathew???
ReplyDeletegood photograph Mr Eley
What a mean story!!
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